Saturday, June 18, 2016

Seasons Come and Go

Using imagery and descriptive language that focused on the use of alliteration was the criteria for capturing the change of season from autumn to winter. Haiku format was our focus for poetic writing. Visits outside of the classroom heightened the senses.




Our poems:

A recent change in the weather, provoked thoughts of a winter yet to come. With an opening line provided, the students found the words to complete these Haiku poems. Our focus was on description and the inclusion of alliteration where possible.

Middle School Haiku

Anu
From the winter breeze
Sleet spins down onto wet paths
Pretty leaves turn white

Mannat
From the winter breeze
Dark dust flies into my eyes
I wipe tears from my lashes

 Angel
From the winter breeze
Frozen seaspray sparkling pink
Against the sunset

Asuka
Snowflake swishing around
He glistening old fir tree
Covering the bark

Sahi
Freezing snow so white
Like pretty white doves flying
In lands far away

Armar
Snowmen battle cold
The snowman throws a snow ball
Snow fights are special

Alyssa
Branches hang on the trees
Autumn leaves float in the wind
It’s so freezing cold.

Seniors  - free verse  (alliteration) + Imagery

Aaron
Orange leaves diving towards the ground
Cool air makes the tree feel sleepy
Hibernating under brown bare branches
Leaves wait to disintegrate


Nishita
Mum, look at the beautiful trees
Colourful leaves wafting like music
From drab dry branches
They fall like ballet dances
Twirling around onto the ground.

Arsh
Majestic gold leaves and red leaves
Orange crunchy dry leaves,
Dying
Skydiving towards the ground



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